They speak of volume
In reality it fills
Thin hopes
Of vacuum.


Pretending

Poetry by P K Padhy
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Written on 2009-09-05 at 14:53

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shells
Love haiku and love this one, condense it into three lines and it's perfect.
2009-09-06



This makes a perfect haiku in three lines my friend.

Wise words, all the same. Really liked the imagery of

Thin hopes of vacuum.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-09-05