I dunno. The parts in brackets aren't meant for the reader to see, they're inner thoughts. If I could change the font colour they'd be in white, so the only way you could see them is if you highlighted the text.


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I hold a disdain but a debt to that distilled drink.
The loosener of tongues, the bringer of closeness.
Dissolving the barriers of acceptable behavior,
the walls I threw around my core have crumbled.
I'd never had that experience in quite that way.
[I'd had it before, 2 or three strangers, I'll admit.]
But with you it was better.
a blending of two happy worlds. i miss it.
Something stewed in anticipation,
fermented in the moment of precipice.
A mere step towards an ultimate finale but a step none the less.
Rum soaked movements, an inebriated magnetism,
a pull of carpe diem.
The contact was simple, the kisses were ripe with the present.
An easy interaction, there was no fear.
[I loved you in that short fraction of contiguity.]
Congruous feelings and sentiment.
The surroundings fell below us in a cloud of forgotten dust.
I glimpsed a sliver of the world beneath your eyes.
[I'll admit I searched too hard before]
I found a weakness in your composure that brought you to my level.
You made yourself real to me.
I love the broken and the lost.
The cracked and the forgotten.
You cracked beneath my fingers
and I basked in the light that shone through.
But I was glued to you, rooted with the fear of the ephemeral.
[I'm sorry for my grasp on you. I was afraid it would die]
I dreamt of you.
I slept walked trying to reach you, I had to help you.
I had to be with you.
The nights I don't regret at all are so precious and rare,
and this one shines brightly.
I can't forget it.




Poetry by Sparks
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Written on 2009-10-13 at 20:41

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Kathy Lockhart
You are a very prolific writer of words resulting in eloquent texts that leave this reader absorbed in the beauty of its poetry.
2009-10-14



A finely expressed insight into a very beautiful brief encounter...who would know it would endure a lifetime in our experience? I suppose there is always a price for such delightful insight.

Great work, thanks for sharing it...

Smiling at you

In memory of a Tai gone by...cheers! or bottoms up!lol

Language: 5
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2009-10-13