i dunno.


tick. tick. tick.

the grinding of impassible thoughts
against the folds and tissues
as an idea, formulated,
out of electric impulse
through microfibre
and minutes
is born
calls me
reminding,
sand is falling
clocks are ticking
the globe, revolving.
people, walking on by.
moving on and progressing
and here i stand, just thinking.
multitude of silly perishable thoughts.




Poetry by Sparks
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Written on 2009-10-15 at 01:56

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I like it. I used to think like this, that all this standing and thinking was wasting time, but then I realised I was meant to be doing it, otherwise I would not be doing it! if you see what I mean?

Yes! time moves on, but at 'Our' own pace. tick tick tick, like a clock, like a heart grinding those impassible thoughts.

I really like this poem from it's first beautifully formed line all the way through its diminishing and increasing lines. Not sure about silly, Ideas come from those tissues and build into a lifetime of executions of those ideas, bringing substance to our lives, and love is the consummation that creates the first microbe to multiple and form the tissues.

Smiling at you,


tai,off to bed to dream up some more great ideas in my future.
2009-10-15