Drag And Drop

The cigarette
a leaning tower of ash
from your fiery fingrtips,
burns at your parting lips
like the biding flame

Eyes that look through me
and a smile so sour
that once knew me,
an ember in the dying hour
that you last spoke my name

The match
a tinderstick of spite
struck with a flick of your pale wrist,
is set to burst alight
at the hand of your ability to mame

A drag
and a soft blow
and your cheeks turn
because your smile knows
that beyond the smoke
it will find my name in the air again.




Poetry by Aven Black
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Written on 2009-10-21 at 00:53

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting use of the deadly sticks.
Nice one
luvestixx
2009-10-22


Sparks
love the rhyme scheme and the rhythm and feel to this,
you created a good image and interesting feelings in my mind
congrats, very cool
2009-10-21


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
i am putting away my lighter
because this makes me feel quite heavy with pleasure :)
2009-10-21



Fabulous imagery here....love the title too. The implications are tantalising...

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-21