I'll Be There

I'll meet you there
In that somewhere in nowhere.
I'll find you within the within
I'll push you into the faded neon of night

I'll seek you out there
Somewhere in somewhere
I'll always see you perfectly
Within the obscured shattered glass.

I'll cross your mind
And curl up in the warm corner of your heart
I'll watch you fall down
And I'll catch you with my invisible arms.

I'll laugh with you
When my wrongs turn to rights
I'll sing with you
And I'll hear every word of our silent lullaby

I'll hear you frown
And I'll intenseify the dark world you're in
I'll overflow the planets that orbit your mind
With the warm emotion of my heart.

No matter where you are
You'll find me there
Even if you're on the borders of outerspace
I'll be there.




Poetry by Sarah Mae~
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Written on 2009-10-30 at 02:55

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Achernar
a wistful and whimsical poem, with the first two stanzas exceptionally unique and very strong... a mos fine and romantical poem... I just loved it!!
2009-11-02


Rob Graber
I enjoyed this very much!

It is possible that the stanzas could be arranged to better effect. Meeting, for example, might more naturally come after seeking rather than before; careful thought about how crossing, laughing, hearing, mattering, and finding best relate to these and to each other may make the poem even better!

PS: Do note that line 18 needs "intensify."
2009-10-30