In the stillness of our being

Since time immemorial

people have fought

for their concepts of thought

a lot of suffering this has brought

but in the silent night

there is no necessity for fight

and stars are shining peacefully bright

in the stillness of our being

there might be some wonderful true seeing.........





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-11-21 at 09:39

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John Ashleigh
To just simply stop and think about the world we're in, is so beautiful. This poem is so peacefull.

Regards,
John.
2010-11-25



that was realy intresting, i loved each line here..its like each one could stand alone as a poem..



nice..donu what to book mark mark lol..like all of them :P
gr8!
2010-02-19



Your poem is like a soothing lullabye to sleep peacefully in heart and mind.

Yes! I agree, where is the need to fight when we can communicate effortlessly?

Smiilng at you

Tai
2009-11-21


P K Padhy
A great reading. I liked the poetic lines ....there is no necessity for fight and stars are shinning peacefully bright ....
Nature has gifted a lot for us to learn. You have coined the expression in a nice way.

Dr P K Padhy, India
2009-11-21