promise (ore the moment I understood the meaning behind my smile)

let me paint your eyes
with the northern lightning
i found in my pocket

(I promise I wont love you)



Poetry by Ace
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Written on 2006-02-17 at 23:05

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barbeina
simply beautiful
2006-03-14


Zoya Zaidi
IT IS SO EFFECTIVE, SO POWERFUL DEAR ACE!
"Nothern lightening" is so cute!
Aad the promise in the last line is so inviting...inviting to be loved...!!!!
Lovely, I JUST LOVE IT!
Ace of a poem Ace!
(((((hugs))))
Love. xxx, Zoya
2006-02-18