Few words

Few words ,mix up with your sweat voice,enclosing with a yellow smile.
Few words written from right to left
I need a mirrow to see their reflection in your eyes as i hear them.
Few words ,i can't hear or even feel their tones.
They are just mumbling inside lost soul..



Poetry by Libyan Rose
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Written on 2010-09-15 at 22:26

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Damon
I don't always comment on what I read. I read both yours and enjoyed both of them as well.

Damon
2010-09-18



It is self evident in your poem that it is not "quantity" that counts, it is "quality!"

Sheriff
2010-09-18