Boundless sky

 

The words have vanished into the sky,

 

and now the last memory drains away

 

We sit together the sky and me

 

until only the sky remains





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Written on 2010-11-25 at 19:09

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countryfog The PoetBay support member heart!
You must be channeling Li Po:

The birds have vanished into the sky,
and now the last cloud drains away.
We sit together, the mountain and me,
until only the mountain remains.

I like yours better.
2010-11-26


John Ashleigh
I am going to have to bookmark this poem, as I cannot get enough of it. The tranquility is absolutely remarkable. I feel more inner-peace. Thankyou for sharing this poem.

Regards,
John.
2010-11-25