its simple, aint it?

Train of words take

feelings on a joyous ride

drugging to sleep

for sometime.

Why do we then just reiterate ?

Will it make it truer?

if there is love in your heart

your actions will speak.





Poetry by existence
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Written on 2010-11-29 at 08:00

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John Ashleigh
If love is content, then the contents of your words ring true.
Again, such a light-hearted -yet true - poem. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!

Regards,
John.
2010-11-29


NicholasG
I suppose we like to underline the important parts, and what is more important than love? On the other hand I totally agree that actions should make it obvious...I guess, in our minds, there is a very fine line between taking for granted and being insecure.
Nick
2010-11-29