Burning question

"Who am I?"

 

This question is burning

 

attention is turning

 

towards its source

 

Who is learning?

 

when all concepts are burning

 

in this fire

 

that consumes the liar





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-12-05 at 14:44

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Wow! I could swear you were picking my brain! "In this fire that consumes the liar". In all honesty the only way one could know this is to live it; as hard as it is for me to mention. This is me and the closing line is them. A one in a million work of art.
Honesty at its best. Thanks so much for this write for it gave me such an insight on where I've been and where I may go in the future.
2010-12-11


countryfog
I have often been sinjged by that fire, lying to myself about "who am I".
2010-12-05


John Ashleigh
It'll take a life-time to really know who you are. This poem is like a pot of gold. A high rating of a poem. Thanks for writing.

Your friend,
John.
2010-12-05