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It doesn't get better I am getting better.



If getting better means, feel the loneliness, you didn’t need. Then yes, since this morning I am getting better! If getting better means to be one out of many silenced souls. Yes, I am getting better at it. Speechless and Invisible, Distanced enough. I can also open & close my eyes. I am getting better. I breathe while floating in the void. So splendiferous! . . . and hey! I am present.D





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Written on 2010-12-16 at 21:44

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Libyan Rose
nice poem , self talk
2010-12-18


John Ashleigh
I am impressed, as always. Such a beautiful take on true to life experiances. Thanks for sharing!

Regards,
John.
2010-12-17


Phyllis J. Rhodes
irony, reluctance, acceptance, humor, light sarcasim...do I sense all of these, or do I misread? Intriguing none-the-less.
2010-12-17



Ah yes! Quite a universal truth kept secret, now revealed in your poem. Many day, I admittedly have not gotten better. So lead the way with this guiding light!
2010-12-17


Rob Graber
And being present is HUGE!

Enjoyed this meditation, Carmen.

:-,?
2010-12-16