A spark in the dark

 

Attention to attention

 

a spark in the dark

 

lights a fire

 

that is burning higher

 

The roof is lost in flames

 

together with all the names

 

revealed is the beauty of the sky

 

This flower of wisdom will never die





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-12-18 at 10:28

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John Ashleigh
It's refreshing to see you rhyme. It doesn't feel pressured at all. Very pleasing imagery. Keep writing.

Regards,
John.
2010-12-18