a rough first draft....




Split (slight revision)

cuneal words
split my head
dividing
gracious
from
contumacious-


my thoughts
stuck
in the
pithless
middle

 

 

* having fun with some word play based on word study: * cuneal–adj. wedgelike; wedge-shaped. Origin: 1570–80; < Latin cune ( us ) a wedge *contumacious-adj. stubbornly perverse or rebellious; willfully and obstinately disobedient. *pithless-adj. spineless, cowardly





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2011-04-23 at 19:08

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John Ashleigh
A potency that impresses me so. I really like this, Mel. It is good seeing you writing more poetry. :)

Regards,
John.
2011-04-23


NicholasG
Nice to have thoughts devoid of emotion sometimes although to arrive there by way words causing ambiguity might not be the ticket :-)
Nick.
2011-04-23