nicely done! this poetic style is not my forte, but this piece is written well. clean, simple & elegant.
less Is more isn't it?!
Language: 4 Format: 4 Mood: 5 Overall: 5 2011-07-23
You often have a very Oriental perspective, a sense of the completeness in the simplicity of a moment and a place, conveyed with a few simple words, never similes or metaphors because it isn't "like" anything, it just is. That's a compliment I can't give very often.
You can just picture a serine place. Great imagery! It was so simple, yet made me think of a very specific place.