This is a mutated sonnet from a rough time I had a couple weeks ago.
It uses 8-6-8-6 Syllables for lines and the rhythm isn't the best, but I liked it so let me know what you think.
and sleeping in your arms.
Oh cheery boy where can you be
with Love and warmth and charm?
My dear your eyes deep sapphire blue
bright shining with your smile
so sadly now seem glazed with dew,
tears fought back quite a while.
Oh Love what remedy is there
to cure this great sadness,
which plagues your countenance so fair
and makes the world a mess?
True hope exists my Love
and fates will change life from above.
Poetry by Ducks
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Written on 2011-10-18 at 04:33
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It uses 8-6-8-6 Syllables for lines and the rhythm isn't the best, but I liked it so let me know what you think.
Duckian Sonnet I (I miss the way you smile at me)
I miss the way you smile at meand sleeping in your arms.
Oh cheery boy where can you be
with Love and warmth and charm?
My dear your eyes deep sapphire blue
bright shining with your smile
so sadly now seem glazed with dew,
tears fought back quite a while.
Oh Love what remedy is there
to cure this great sadness,
which plagues your countenance so fair
and makes the world a mess?
True hope exists my Love
and fates will change life from above.
Poetry by Ducks
Read 734 times
Written on 2011-10-18 at 04:33
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