first off > im nt rly good at titles! and this is ....welL this is kinda like a story written in the form of a poem...its BAD, buh watever...i stilL posted it.


friendship (betrayal?)

We were...
What you call, "BEST FRIENDS"
But that was back then;
And then things began to change,
You two, decided to go on your way,
And had nothing much to say,
Hung up the phone
And left me there, alL alone.

And you both messed up pretty bad,
I didnt give a damn about her,
But you, i was attached to you,
I did everything i could do,
To try and save you.

And since then,
Ive been the "friend"
You used, to save yourself from trouble,
Buh you never cared for me,
You wanted her to be with you,
But needed me when trouble came,
And to save yourself from the shame.
And i, like a fool,
Acted like your tool.

And finalLy,
When i got back to my senses,
Decided to kick your ***es
Stopped caring for you,
YOu BOTH MESSED UP again, BIG TIME,
Cause you always were "Partners in crime"
And this time, you knew,
I was of no help,
You had to save yourself.

At that point,
The parents had to step in,
Cause it was no minor error,
This time, you guys had caused a lot of terror.

They forbade you from talking to her,
I was happy,
It alL happend so fast
Buh obviously it was too good to last,

You went back to her,
I told you, you would get into trouble,
You didnt hear me out
Instead you jus grumbled.

And then, both of you,
Asked me to join the gang too,
And i, i didnt know what to do,
But I, was tempted,
For back then i was resented,


Now i had a chance to start over new,
Be happy again,
But as the days were passing by,
And we didnt have school,
I've been thinking,
I mean, after alL that has happend...
How could i trust u?
What if alL this was jus pretend?
What if this is alL jus a game?
If that was to happen again..
I would go insane,
Cause i cant take that kinda pain,
No, not again.

WelL i've had enough of play,
And now i'm gonna stay away.

















Poetry by aquadragon
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Written on 2011-10-27 at 09:10

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Jalaj Soni
It isn't bad :)
As has been said earlier.. the emotions reflect in this poem and come to the reader beautifully!
Good stuff :)
2011-11-06


Melissa Ormond
I know exactly how you feel! Being shrugged off to the side, and only really being given attention when it benefits the supposed 'best friend'. Great write, I can sense your emotions coming through!(:
2011-10-28