NIGHT TO DAWN

Awaiting the crack of dawn

That darkest hour so long

When it's winter time

Ken D Williams

The Dyslexic Wordsmith



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Written on 2013-01-23 at 22:03

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Winter haiku! The beauty of nature in its raw and rugged state. I would drop the "is" on the second line, for effect. But that's just me. I can see them flourish both versions. Just sounding out a thought on possibilities. Thanks for sharing.
2013-01-24