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C'era una volta un uomo
Con gli occhi verso la luna
E si chiedeva:
"Verra presto l'amore?"
E che altro esiste
In un cuore gelato?
Tranne il pensiero



Once my ignorance was bliss
Nightfall came
Like a serpent's kiss
To my troubled mind

Some of this pain is sole subjected
But what was I to do
Some of this pain will always stay
Deep and true

Ignore the past
Revel in the future
My best advice to you



Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-04-11 at 18:44

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Amanda K
that was a very sound poem.

all the best on 2007,
2007-01-07


Lourdes
(My cuore is so not gelato after reading this)
Beautifully written.
2006-04-15


.
I found this very touching, the second and third stanza's were speaking to me alone.
Thank you
Liam x
2006-04-15


Troll
"nightfall came like a serpent's kiss"

wow, whatta line, that rocks.

but, what about the present? if i'm only reveling in the future, does it ever become now? and what about job applications? should i ignore the past, and write better stuff? because, it's all part of reveling in my future job i got by lying... rofl, juuust kidding, no harm meant.

i like the ideas behind this, about letting go of the past (something we all need to do)

~Troll
2006-04-12


Zoya Zaidi
Mi corason, ju no comprando espanialo!
(just kidding!)

Very beautifully written!
(((((hugs)))))
Sweetheart!

"these lines are very powerful!
Once my ignorance was bliss
Nightfall came
Like a serpent's kiss
To my troubled mind"

love,xxx, Zoya
2006-04-11