Shall we create a poetbay cento writing challenge?Remember though that you need to get each author's approval before you cite them:)Photograph: Sanicula
arctopoides protected species in some areas Taken by Eric Hunt



Wait a sec ~Poetbay cento ;)*revised!!!*


Complete version

The owl flew by me
Like a promising poem that goes unwritten
A tree branch leaned over me:
things do have a way of changin
like footsteps of spring . . .

 

 

Sources:
line 2 Chaucer Whethers  -  Where is There 
line 4 Rob Graber Uncle Ikey's - last words #17
Line 1,3,5 night soul woman - Wait a sec

 

 

 

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The owl flew by me
Like a promising poem that goes unwritten
A tree branch leaned over me:
pending approval
like footsteps of spring . . .

Sources:

line 2 Chaucer Whethers  -  Where is There 
line 4 pending approval
Line 1,3,5 night soul woman - Wait a sec







Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2014-02-22 at 02:16

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Well worth it :) Gives a really nice result, the feeling is peaceful for me... well done.
2014-02-23


Rob Graber
Nice piece! Ikey and I hope line 4 was worth waitin for

:-,?
2014-02-22


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Aw... there's a line missing! The suspense is building... ;)

Sounds really nice so far though... I like the idea :)
2014-02-22


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Love it, you are good at this. :D
2014-02-22