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Cats at Night (Triolet)

 

- NSW asked if I wanted to write a triolet... this is what came to mind... I have two young cats... compared to my two twenty-year-old cats who have sadly passed on now, the two 3-year-olds I currenly have are very active little ones...  I love them, but there's this little matter  ...  ;)

 

In the still of the quiet night

They will suddenly feel the urge

To run around in a right fright

In the still of the quiet night

Chasing; banging; breaking: their rite

About peace you will sing a dirge

In the still of the quiet night

They will suddenly feel the urge

 

 





Words by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2014-03-14 at 19:29

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Aw you captured a perfect moment:) Every time my cat does that and wakes me up as soon as I realize why I woke up I feel a heartwarming smile on my lips, I talk to the cat and fall asleep but your kittens are still young:D lol the only solution would be to play with them a lot exhaust them so by the time it is bedtime for you they also want to sleep:D - for the rest of the night if you are lucky

Oh I also loved the introduction it created the right mood before entering the poem:

" I have two young cats... compared to my two twenty-year-old cats who have sadly passed on now, the two 3-year-olds I currenly have are very active little ones... I love them, but there's this little matter ... ;)"

Well done and thank you for participating!:)
2014-03-18


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Forgot to say great picture too. Two very content looking moggies. Both looking satisfactorily pleased with themselves.
2014-03-16


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
All I have to say is "Ab...bbby!". Needless to say brought a huge smile. :D
2014-03-16



Made me smile, love cats...
2014-03-15


Nabeela Altaf
I can completely symapathise you in this matter. My cats do the same :)
2014-03-15


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
I have a wild rabbit named Vinny who I haven't heard a peep from, and who only rarely moves about far as I have been able to tell.
Hope these wild night cats will spare Vinny should they encounter him upon their midnight revels. ;D
2014-03-14


Elle
I have a twenty year old cat - and he has just discovered a new lease of life - this really did make me smile - my cat has this thing about the bathroom and howls - he also has taken to prowling around my bedroom at night - you sound like you are having fun, if not sleepless nights - cats are enchanting :-)

Elle x
2014-03-14



This one made me smile. I love cats and have always surrounded myself with one or two. Ohh, but that little stage is too precious to be angry! :)))
2014-03-14