I need.


I need my lips to reach your kiss,
my mouth to taste that holy bliss.

I need to say my love is true,
my words to tell all this to you.

I need to hear your whispering voice,
my ears to enjoy that silent noise.

I need my mind to open up,
my hopes to climb the highest top.

I need my soul to reach the sky,
my heart to dream that I can fly.

Av: Boa Berg
2004-06-19
03:00




Poetry by Boa Berg
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Written on 2005-08-03 at 08:21

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
very beautiful expression of love... with needful longing... i like your rhyming style... i find love is hard to convey in rhymes because usually the style kind of limits expression, in my opinion... especially if youre an author who is mindful about clichés... but the emotion put into this and the thoughts reflected are laid out clearly and in a way that readers can relate to easily... very nice poem... i enjoyed this :)

later...xx
2005-08-03


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
softly loving piece of poetry, love is the dream.
2005-08-03