I will edit it again but here it is :) The title is inspired by the title of Noriko Ibaraki "Trees like traveling")




Unconditionally lost



 

 

Unconditionally lost do I choose to be and forever yours without any remorse

I will let you feel the freedom of being lost
while becoming a part of everything
without needing to keep being your
everything

I will keep coming to you stay in your embrace
let you feel what it means not to have to make sense
of everything plan ahead of time

We don’t need more time because we make time stop

I want us to feel like the freshly picked, slightly chilled and already washed by the rain strawberry I ‘ve tasted right after one rainy summer morning  I don’t need to wait for this moment to happen again Or find a way to make it happen for me

Keep in your mind that only when we are unconditionally  lost can we try to understand each other feel who we become by simply being present perhaps enjoy living in the moment than being a part of a plan or a way to a
destination and always being the same need...




 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2015-07-12 at 12:27

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This is very personal and very moving. It has the feel of 50 First Dates where every day is an open and new discovery. I would like to see it edited and maybe expanded.
2015-07-14



I love the title.
I found the poem exceedingly emotional and brilliantly written.
It could only leave me with a sigh.
Ashe
2015-07-12