"Let's start over how are you feeling today?"

To interrupt two minds with the bliss of now
why come to a conclusion about each other
when what we have that is ours & ours alone
exists inside the silent bliss of now?

"& it's a fact what the body don't hear
The body will feel for sure" from
Science in violence by Riffles
studio album the great escape

Bring out the big words!
I exist inside the silence.

No target to aim to
Just surrender
to the bliss of
our now

Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-07-28 at 03:35

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow. Wonderfully constructed. I love "Bring out the big words!
I exist inside the silence.". There are always big words when things go wrong. Why not smaller ones? A very nice piece indeed.

jim The PoetBay support member heart!
This touches on the problem some have, including myself, of constantly assessing oneself and the world around you. It does take you out of the moment, and it is hard on those around you, and when I say "you" I mean me.

This is a pointed poem, NSW. You probably noticed.

Arunesh dixit
The interjection has brought a bliss when two converge to become One. Very well communicated in your poem. And, the silence is also loudly spoken. Smoothly flowing from beginning to end and made a "V"ortex of thoughts afterwards....

Arunesh Dixit