Eh, I love this poem. - 1st May 2006


The crying wolf.

The calefactive mountains,

The bark of a crying wolf

Echoes to me.

So I leave, and walk,

Enjoying being free with the wind.

Beneath that cry,

It’s apology.

Inspire me to climb

As high as I can dream.





Poetry by John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-01 at 20:08

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Nathalia
Lovely poem, thoughtful and wild - as a wolf!
2006-05-03


Zoya Zaidi
Climb Higher and Higher, my love,
And one day you will reach the summit of your dreams,
The depth of your desires,
The width of your ambitions,
And the vast expanse of your aspirations. Climb, Climb my friend, climb higher and higher.
And I am there standing at the foot of the summit watching you progress with fond feeling of wrmth.
**Hugs**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-03


Kathy Lockhart
Yes, John, Listen to that cry...it calls you...you are the wolf.....kathy
2006-05-02


Christian Ward
Only one word to describe this: upbeat

I liked the metaphor of the wolf, extremely effective.

p.s one thing:

in the line 'It's apology' change it's to its
the apostrophe isn't needed, unless you really wanted to say 'it is apology'
2006-05-01


lynn
john this poem is so beautiful which doesnt suprise me i love your poems and keep them comming!!!
oooooooo amber lynn xxxxxxx
2006-05-01