This is about some people going to externship at college




Forever Friends

You're my friend and that is true,
but the gift was given from me to you.
 We went through moments that were good and bad,
even moments that were happy and sad.
 You supported me when I was in tears,
we stuck together when we were in fear,

It's really sad that it had to be this way,
but it has reached its very last day.
 Miles away can't keep us apart,
'cause you'll always be in my heart.





Poetry by Keiko
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Written on 2015-07-30 at 23:05

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Keiko
Thank you both for your kind words.
2016-04-13


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice and with perfect rhyme :)
2015-08-03


John Ashleigh
The rhyming is perfect and the sentiment is heart warming. If I could offer some criticism, it would be that you have used text speak for 'through' in L3. It stems the flow a little. Thanks for sharing!

Regards,
John.
2015-07-30