this is an unfinisheed peice of work that i intend to keep unfinnished
if i get any more reasons to write about this subject
i shall


emo

there is a lot of people today
who we all know
and think are ok
who are emo
when they say
what they know
they think that today
they will sew
the peises that they
broke to show
what they couldnt say
to the people they know

what do we say?
to those who stand
and wait too see
where the blood will land?

these are the issues
that no one talks about
these are the issues
that all will cry about
these are the issues
that the youth will think about
these are the issues
that the old wil hear about

when will we stop this?
this harrem of fear?
when will they feel this?
the weight of this tear?

or maybe should ask?
who?
will take this task?
you?
will you take of your mask?
through
this words of the flask.
new
people will replace the last.
who?
will take this task?



Poetry by seven
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Written on 2006-05-02 at 05:05

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Mischa Ash Brookes
i'm an emo kid and i can relate!
2006-05-03


Jon Hanover
Apart from Emo being a town in Ireland, as well as Canada is it the new slng for emo-tional ? Just curious. When it is finished post it again and I will be happy to give my comments on it then ok.
2006-05-02


Sithre Lateralus
Takes afew reads,
but comes across with a flow!
A FLOW go you.
i'm proud
*tear*.

its actually pretty good.
nice work meady.
<7
2006-05-02