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The shaky hands Marionette

Of these strings,
Strings upon,
Pulled upon
Decisions undecided
These strings,
To were unknown
Leader in the dark
Sky,
Master of the abyssal
Curiosity

Of these strings,
Motions and,
Feelings revolve
Emotions rethought
These strings,
To were you hands move,
Twitch to take form,
Within my actions,

Of These Strings,
Snap and crack,
Any thought of tangent Stings
Against your puppet,
Master of Curiosity




Poetry by Sithre Lateralus
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Written on 2006-05-02 at 06:42

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John Ashleigh
"snap and crack"

The onomatopea relates with the rest of the poem, and that is a challenge for many poets. This shows effort, and I like that and the prose.

Good.
2006-05-02