Attempts at a Haiku.
*I like night cloud watching better then
day cloud watching.


Overcast Nights.

Shadow of the sky

Patience of the white sky

Idea of the clouds




Haiku by Sithre Lateralus
Read 732 times
Written on 2006-05-05 at 02:50

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Zoya Zaidi
Yes, clouds in the night sky, hiding and revealing the Moon, forever travelling in the sky, are certainly very interesting!
**hugs**
love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-08


Christian Ward
Good haiku effort.

p.s don't worry about the traditional 5-7-5 syllable rule. Modern interpretations of haiku tend to concentrate on the image
2006-05-05



Well that was really close -
it's about nature
and the syllabication goes 5-7-5...
this one appears to be 5-6-6.
2006-05-05


Teala
Nice calming images, good job!
2006-05-05