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Rick Crown

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defined.

2006-10-28
Wellspunctuated. & this is great! defy the definer. I'd say more, but the room is spinning slightly, and I think saying great is plenty.


Smoke

2006-10-15
smoke has always fascinated me. accidental rhyming is fun. especially when it occrus within a line.


my mind carries an ocean but you're the one with legs

2006-10-15
quirky. much enjoyed. thank you for sharing.


grasshopper

2006-10-15
yes. pity to the ones who cannot see the moon. yes. velly good.


The Boy In the Attic

2006-10-15
ah and the spirtual cleanses the earthly. that's what someone told me.


Just follow my lead... down there

2006-10-15
beautiful. haha.


Burning Bright Before Dying Out...

2006-10-15
What a wonderful string of words. Organic, stimulating, spicy! much enjoyed.


Freedon From Rating

2006-10-15
Too true. Art suffers when scrutinized and compared.


Blackout

2006-10-15
Like the poem. Wonder what peoples did before electricity? It sounds challenging.


change

2006-10-15
No idiot is aware of that six foot drop... Well written. I especially enjoyed the metaphor with the trampolins.