defined.
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2006-10-28 Wellspunctuated. & this is great! defy the definer. I'd say more, but the room is spinning slightly, and I think saying great is plenty.
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Smoke
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2006-10-15 smoke has always fascinated me. accidental rhyming is fun. especially when it occrus within a line.
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my mind carries an ocean but you're the one with legs
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2006-10-15 quirky. much enjoyed. thank you for sharing.
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grasshopper
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2006-10-15 yes. pity to the ones who cannot see the moon. yes. velly good.
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The Boy In the Attic
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2006-10-15 ah and the spirtual cleanses the earthly. that's what someone told me.
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Just follow my lead... down there
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2006-10-15 beautiful. haha.
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Burning Bright Before Dying Out...
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2006-10-15 What a wonderful string of words. Organic, stimulating, spicy! much enjoyed.
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Freedon From Rating
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2006-10-15 Too true. Art suffers when scrutinized and compared.
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Blackout
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2006-10-15 Like the poem. Wonder what peoples did before electricity? It sounds challenging.
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change
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2006-10-15 No idiot is aware of that six foot drop... Well written. I especially enjoyed the metaphor with the trampolins.
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