Jewelia

2005-09-02
It really feels like this poem uncovers a huge secret or truth, almost something holy or untouchable. It's the kind of poem that leaves you with goose bumps. Wonderful! What else can I say?

2005-09-02
I'm sorry but i'll have to agree with the previous comment. I had to read the poem three times to make any sense of it. Please know that I really like the poem, it's just that it needs to be saved by some rephrazing or perhaps a couple of good old commas.