| Paranoid.
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2005-10-03
You know what they say, if you think they are talking about you, they probably are. Then when you find they are not it comes as a bit of a disappointment.
Levity aside, if you are being bullied, try to speak to someone who can help.
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| fucking life
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2005-10-03
Actually, I'm new and I rather liked it. Profound. I might have added three more words at the end myself, but I haven't found the site rules yet lol.
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| Come tonight
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2005-09-30
I like the accent. It gives a sense of the separateness , uncertainty and impatience for to have everything at once, but knowing this is not wise. Also, I think the line
'why I write these things'
suggests notes in a diary, which makes the language grammar work.
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| Spontaneous Apeirophobia
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2005-09-30
Monet? oops ,moment
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| Spontaneous Apeirophobia
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2005-09-30
The images are superb. The fine detail described so succintly, the picture and feeling of held breath hold the monet perfectly.
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| The contradiction of our future
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2005-09-30
I liked this a lot. The cynical tones of the mercenary fortune teller and the almost desperation to know and by knowing to heal. I also like the confidential whispering tone, contrasted with the tinge of sarcasm.
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