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Downpour		2009-08-02 I enjoyed this and the images that it brought to mind. I especially liked the phrase "with the fury of brimstone falling on Gomorrah," Great line
The Last Ride		2009-06-04 THis has a nice feel but in the end I am left wondering what it is actually about. THE end, THE last ride? Overall I like it but I left me wanting more info.
Smiling kisses (makes your mind go wild)		2009-06-04 I like it.
Humerus		2009-06-04 Is this poem about Decorum, or is it about the fear of pushing on to more intimacy? I liked it. Personally I think the first half is stronger than the second but then maybe that strengthens the quesion.