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bluebackpack

31 years old from USA


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Transtormation

2011-02-16
This needs to be made into a song =)


The Brave, Bold Boys

2011-02-16
S**t, girl.
=)


On Servitude

2011-02-16
Favorite of all of these, just--by far. Favorite.
I think mostly because I didn't know about this relationship, and the sweetness of this is wonderful. And very well put into words. I understand the sentiment, and have felt the same way towards my own sister at times.


Their World at Rest

2010-11-19
I agree; the last line of the 4th stanza has really strong meaning.

I feel like the whole poem could be a really depressing metaphor...

I think it would be interesting if this had a companion poem that finished the cycle of life and such, and rebuilt everything that died in this poem. Just a thought.

Good work =)


Dear Pearl--

2010-10-31
oh god...this is so beautiful and so sad =(


Es schneit

2010-02-03
Kudos--I'd be too scared to write anything in German.


A Wall

2010-01-08
dang....
what is it with us and walls?
I'm sorry you feel like that with whoever all you're talking about...it's an unpleasant thing


who needs a klondike bar?

2009-12-10
heh


I Mean Nothing.

2009-11-16
oh i LOVE this!
really snappy but frustrated at the same time...i like how the ending catches you by surprise; from the first two lines i'd expected a love poem
hope you feel better about everything!


when she walks

2009-10-26
I must have read this five or so times. Beautiful.