| to my companion in life
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2006-05-16
Why settle when your words prove you deserving of truly LIVING. LIVE.. :)
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| Hahaha
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2006-05-16
I wish I could convey myself so perfectly in such few words.. Definitely a poem I can relate to.. thanks for sharing..
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| Unlearn.
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2006-05-16
*raises hand* I'll stand up with you! :D..
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| Tears of the Sea
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2006-05-09
Cleverly written and beautifully executed. The emotions of the ocean :)
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| Zoya
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2006-05-09
I second this.. Zoya you deserve it :)
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| What I Really Want
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2006-04-28
This was a great poem. Little things like "Your vision is so incredibly distorted" gave a really human characteristic to the speakers. I really enjoyed :)
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| Sunday not of this world
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2006-04-27
This was beautiful... So soothing and so touching. You would have made her proud :-).
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| Lost in You
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2006-04-26
Amanda this was amazing, the first time I read it it didn't impact on me so much but now it's so much more vivid. The imagery is fantastic. I'm so happy you're sharing this :-)
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| my last punk, asshole
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2006-04-26
I honestly couldn't figure out what to say here at first. What you wrote I can definitely relate to in some ways but, I dunno.. Heh I guess I don't know what to say even now. Keep writing though, it's surprising how sometimes someone can say better than myself what I want to say on my own..
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| Behind your skin
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2006-04-26
I think we all want to tell someone that at some point in our lives... To the point. Simple. Sweet :)
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| In
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2006-04-24
I really liked this.. It speaks alot that I can relate to and was extremely well put together. Really really nice :-)
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| Till the End
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2006-04-23
i love
I love
:).. mandapoo plz write more, you're fantastic
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| Carousel of Doom
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2006-04-22
Gosh Shas you surprised me with the power in these words. Tumbs up... definitely
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| Without You
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2006-04-13
Ok I've taken into consideration your age and yet... this poem has such powerful emotion and expression... I'm in bewilderment at your ability, jealous to an extent even! Your potential is scary :)
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| Without You
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2006-04-13
Ok I've taken into consideration your age and yet... this poem has such powerful emotion and expression... I'm in bewilderment at your ability, jealous to an extent even! Your potential is scary :)
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| 'Potato Eaters'
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2006-04-07
Ok I REALLY enjoyed this one Zoya... It's so vivid I felt as though I was there. Even now the images still linger. Fantastic.
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| a childs eyes,
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2006-04-07
Yes.. to be a chld, things seemed so simple then. I can definitely relate there :-). Great stuff.
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| The Love Letters
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2006-04-07
How true. Well written, well expressed :D.
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| The Warrior of Romance, II
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2006-04-07
Wow I reeeally like the setting and imagery of this poem. Simply amazing :-)
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| My Beautiful Friend
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2006-04-07
you hold this friend a high regard.. and you express it very well :-)
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| May she be better than me
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2006-03-01
this is nice. Very selfless and strong :-). I like.
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| Cage of Mirrors
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2006-02-28
Wow I'm impressed. Your writing grew alot in very little time.
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