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Together as two

2018-04-11
a very intriguing read.


LIFE CAN BE SO DIFFICLT! (Basede On A Conversation I Had While Waiting For The Loop)

2018-04-04
yes, very true. To be productive is good but so much better is to be of some use. i like being useful and one always is. very nice poem, Ken. i totally get it. Thanks for always being here on poet bay.


To know that face

2018-04-04
this poem is amazingly beautiful and very lovely! wish i had written it!


Solid Soul Love.

2018-03-21
Beautiful, stay blessed!


book

2018-03-21
ha ha


Own

2018-03-21
yes, we would! in nature, we rest.


KISS ME WITH YOUR EYES

2018-02-07
very nice idea


WE THAT WRITE!

2017-12-08
oh yes! and if the critics were to read it! what a happy laugh we would have at their cost!


Yin/Yang

2017-12-05
so good to read this poem today when my heart is without a frown and am more like a clown! lovely read.


I miss you

2017-09-19
Please tell him or may be just told him. Beautiful


THE LOVE OF FRIENDSHIP! - MATESHIP!

2017-09-11
Ha ha very well said


WHEN STUMPED FOR WORDS!

2017-09-07
Yes, snapshots of life going unnoted. Yes, Ken.


a lone saturday in august

2017-08-26
Strong imagery of August, of you and September. Ending on a peaceful note as we all desire. Tomorrow full of peace, as we all hope for we d tide over the storms of today or the storms will themselves wane..

( side thought -but want about the destruction or the threat of destruction these storms entail. I guess We are warned in advance and we take all measures to protect ourselves. We do.)


I Remember You

2017-08-23
Tender and true...always and forever
So sad and yet love makes it so beautiful for us to read.


WHEN A FREIEND APPEARS TO BE GONE!

2017-08-22
Ken, sometimes the leaving is sudden and sometimes it is gradual over a period of time. And one just wakes up to find that the person who was real and present once or you thought so was really there has long left but you have only realised now.
Keep writing! Be easy!


I'm sad

2017-06-19
Yes, very well said, this poem. Lovely thoughts. I am sad too sometimes and then just wear my smile, thinking good thoughts or laugh at pitiable condition, I find myself in. Or write and then words weave such a magic that I am soon out of the maze of sadness.


Early Morning

2016-09-29
Beautiful Beautiful Poem
Morning Rhythm
I enjoyed it so much


The river

2016-09-29
I loved reading your poem. A true indulgence it has been. Thanks for the repost


THEY SAY IT's A GIFT!

2016-09-01
Ha ha !! But why curses!!! Poems are so unique.


Thank you for being you.

2016-09-01
A poem is meant to be beautiful and it is so beautiful. Heart rending and heart warming beautiful


Short on time

2016-08-31
Beautiful! I loved your poem and the words you had to say!


What I think about

2016-08-31
Yes, think about these things. A beautiful poem.


A Mother's Dream

2016-08-30
Oh Kathy! So much pain there is for a mother, for a loving heart. Take care and hugs. A Mother's heart is a safe place for a child of forty years


The Addiction Epidemic

2016-08-30
The words and poem convey your anguish.
"The simplest life is the happiest life."


Your impression.

2016-08-11
Yes, sweet meandering of words flowing in your poem. A lovely read.


WORDS SAID MISUNDERSTOOD

2016-08-11
Yes, words sometime complicate. One should just play with them.


WORDS SAID MISUNDERSTOOD

2016-08-11
Yes, words sometime complicate. One should just play with them.


Dolphin

2016-08-02
A lovely poem and a Wonderful read.


smoke and ash

2016-08-01
The words that hold us steady!Thank you words for coming and shaping the poem, which rises from the charred remains. A beautiful poem.


AWAITING

2016-07-31
What is it? Hopefully we d soon know.


on fortitude

2016-07-29
A lesson to remember
To know quiet contentment
and singleminded fortitude

Love these words
Beautiful poem.


Door

2016-07-29
Poignant imagery. Inspiring words.


THE MIND SET FREE!

2016-07-25
Yes, play on


The Day's Long Journey

2016-07-22
It's a lovely poem..inspires me to live each day enjoying it for what it is- a day.


To Lucille and BB King

2016-07-16
Very impressive dream, indeed and such a blessing.


So as the Tree Grows a Family

2016-07-02
Families are special and hold lot of meaning in our lives. This is a special poem.


a moment come and gone

2016-07-01
Awareness and acceptance of what is. A lovely poem, indeed.


Rainy Day Parade

2016-07-01
A lovely invite!!! Beautiful!!!


Silent Anger

2016-06-30
It's a labour of love, this poem. Sometimes anger gets stored somewhere in the chest of drawers. Your poem helps to take it out, see it for it is and release it.


Before Life

2016-06-30
Paris, Lo and Behold, here she comes!!!!
Loved reading this poem.


Roses

2016-06-18
Wow!! Already reeling!!!


ON LINE - FRINDSHIPS!

2016-06-16
Yes, indeed. We had pen friends earlier.


My last request.

2016-04-21
A simple request, what if it's the last one! Love is in the air, mingling with the ashes.


anticipation of a kiss

2016-04-21
Best use of the words!


Everything but me

2016-04-21
So well conveyed...waiting!!! And how it need not be tinged with sadness even if it actually is!! But a poet can add ones own colours to it.


A Cove

2016-04-21
Beautiful words


you

2016-04-06
It feels as if it was written just for me... It's beautiful.


Vino Voluntaire

2016-03-08
Very well said
so much so
it makes a beautiful read
and the easy promise it holds
for you are listening to your body
and its cells
(the mind can manage its own business)


Nearness

2016-02-11
and my immense dependence on them for they find me when i am lost)


SOME SAY ''JUST NOTHING TO WRITE ABOUT ''

2016-01-31
How so true and inspiring....and so very well said.