Liona

2006-03-12
hei/hallo/god dag
you've got your norwegian grammar a little wrong, it's called "mine forfedre", not "mitt forfedre".
and i can tell those so-called-experts that norway became danish in the middleages, after the vikings..
when it comes down to the poem, i can't say i like it very much. the words became very empty to me.
and i liked the english version best, because the norwegian wasn't any poetic at all.
if i shall give you one last advice; i would have changed the last sentence to "min innerste djevel" or "djevelen i meg". better norwegian, and it sound much better. :)

adjø/ha det/farvel from norway