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Frederick James

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In Remembrance of Grandma

2007-04-25
This is incredibly touching. You say so much about your grandma with such little description yet I feel her energy. I love the ending.


Ride Paladin ride by M.A.Meddings

2006-06-02
ha! I loved this. a great peice of comedy. Your rhyming is wonderful and really adds to the whole comedic thing. You have rhymes within each line too and i just ove that.

Fantastic!


Its a born Sin

2006-06-02
Your repetition really adds to the effect. I like that about it.
It's a somewhat sad peice and you've pulled it off very well.