This is a response to Thomas Perdue's "Sonnet 3"



Quiet Acceptance

Death is here in our final hour

Ding!! Ding!!

How our will is drained of power

What silent songs angels sing

Only fate knows not of death

Its slow and settling dance

Vitality takes one last breath

As we accept our final trance

Time plays out the duration

Then waits at our heels

Safety from all temptation

The wind and poisoned meals

One last thought before the lights go out

I've seen the truth and have no doubt





Sonnet by Coolaaron88 The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-11-26 at 00:30

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Totally Terrific that takes the time of breath away. I loved it. Sorry i got carried away with the Ts. *Bookmark*

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2006-12-07


Saga
"Can't rain all the time" You get better and better with every piece!!!

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2006-11-26


Phyllis J. Rhodes
An exciting read!
2006-11-26


Dirty-pretty-things
Wow!

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2006-11-26


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
This has a great flow Aaron and a thought-filled message. Well done.
2006-11-26

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In Deep Thought
by Coolaaron88