Turning the Tables

At this significant milestone

Its more than just the clock striking twleve

A sense of revival is felt immensly

A shedding of old problems

A relinquishing of a sturdy burden

A relasing of issues apparent

On the surface it may seem simple

But beneath the surface is an idea

A clearing of the thoughts

And an time of realization

With this very revial of the mind

Comes the cleansing of the sprit

And an uncharted new land

 





Poetry by Coolaaron88 The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-31 at 02:37

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tony legba
Grammar?
This os finely expressed.
Line 5 is well phrased, the weighting of sound fitting the meaning!
Okri would call this Spring Cleaning of the soul.
There is a lightness of touch that carries the meaning well.
At last!
Eureka.

Language: 4
Format: 4
Mood: 5
Overall: 4
2006-12-31


kath
yes totaly uncharted and we are its explorers....

happy new year
rgds kath
2006-12-31


Xuxa
Some wise thoughts here. Well done.
2006-12-31

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