Jamsbo Rockda
I like this format of prose. It spaces out the information nicely. They say that when presenting work you should make use of the silence. This does that.
2016-06-01

Kathy Lockhart
Oh, you have such a gift of writing. These heartbreaks now hurt so badly but you will use these times, and the good times, as life's way of developing all you need for whatever you may face down the road. Even now, as you have written your poem, with such poignancy and style, you show how you are using the emotions you are feeling for something positive in your life. Keep expressing yourself through writing or other artistic/creative ways in which you have an interest. You will see how much you add to the world by just being you. Kathy
2016-05-28

JK Fisher
In every night,
thoughts awaken spirits
and dreams and lust.

Nobody will ever enjoy
life without you.
Life just goes on.

Joel
2016-05-27