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Labyrinth Sister

An atom of dust
Smites moonlit beams from your eyes
Reverse oblique face

Sandcastle stardust
Galaxies of thought burning
Lighting purple veins



Haiku by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-06-19 at 02:05

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Much style but not enough substance I guess. Or maybe too dense for me? Some of your poems are like that they leave me scratching my head because they seem to be so complex but also complex for no good reason
2016-06-20