The One


Carmel ...
you let it all fall so soft

winter comes and hits us so badly

thunder hurts

then you come with your hand

and caress

and tell all is ok

your wonderful poetry

in your fingers

that say yes

to all my faults

to all my wrong doings

when then

you decide that all is well

you say that

with such a power

that I just say

yes.



Words by Ivan R
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Written on 2017-01-20 at 07:03

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Yanto
Moving

I absolutely love this kind of writing.
you should be proud of it.
2017-02-03



Ah, the tender power of a loving woman. "Poetry in your fingers" , pure poetry! Great writing Ivan. gsv
2017-01-24



I believe you are talking about love. The love of a human being who is not judging you. Compassion and love go together.
Many hugs to you.
Ashe
2017-01-21


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Soft and poignant.
2017-01-21