Bereft

She's gone,
I am silent
amongst life,
it's barren here
in my land,
icy and minus degrees,
frozen heart,
external warmth
isn't enough,
overwhelmed
overtaken,
lost .



Poetry by shells
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Written on 2017-01-22 at 17:21

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So deeply felt, so directly expressed.
2017-01-26


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
A compelling expression of something very hard to express. Simple and powerful.
2017-01-22



Summer will come and bring new warmth. Let the sadness take its time. It's necessary to feel it before it can leave. I love the poem. So full of feeling.
Ashe
2017-01-22


KYREUS of Sweden The PoetBay support member heart!
Bleeding,
lacking...
..it
2017-01-22