short poem ,just explaining how i feel ,,,,


play ground

i was just a child,playing in the play ground,thinking i was free,until the beast came and played with me .
from that day the child was lost in me ,they took away my destiny to be who i wanted to be .they walked free leaving the devil to haunt me for eternalily .......



Poetry by dee quirke
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Written on 2017-10-29 at 16:34

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dee quirke
thank you all for your kind words ,i really mean that ,thank you
2017-11-14


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Well written Dee. You're safe here.
2017-10-30



It's good to write about. It's a step to getting it out in the open instead of inside of you. Such a sad thing, and it can happen in such an innocent place. The title, and then reading the poem, is a shock. You are very brave. Keep writing, Dee. I like the way your write.
Ashe
2017-10-29


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Your ONE of US, hear, now, Dee, very much so!
Ken
2017-10-29


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo! Keep on writing, Dee.
Ken
2017-10-29


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Kathy says it all, dear, Dee, hear your among the finest, kind of all that is humanity.
Ken
2017-10-29


Kathy Lockhart
I keep reading that first line over and over. It is like a gong, ringing out, for all the innocence that has been stolen in their safe places. Your poetry is powerful, Dee. Every line your write down you strip away the hold, the chains, of that beast had over you. You lash him down instead. You become the victor, not the victim. Your Destiny belongs to you and you Create it every day!
2017-10-29