Where am I?

Where am I ?
searching searching
nothing have I found.

There are circles
round and round
decreasing ever.

Answers elusive
coming to me never
procrastination is black.

Two steps forward
one step back
where am I?

Poetry by shells
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Written on 2017-11-06 at 18:58

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
We are all usually lost - it's just that only some of us will admit it.

one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I love this. Searching searching/nothing have I found. Yet, here you are. It found you.

Rob Graber
I like the brevity and careful word choice, especially the spare, off-balanced rhymes. Actually, the subtle, back-stepping rhyme scheme is blowing my mind the more I study it. BRAVO!

Being lost is much more pleasant in poetry than in reality.

You already have the perfect answer from Kryus: You are on planet Earth! He made me laugh. Many of us share your feelings of being lost. :)

KYREUS of Sweden The PoetBay support member heart!
Planet EARTH dilemma