Quiet Talk

Desolved in the worlds embrace,
The biting cold freezing me out,
Like thorns wrapped around my heart,
This cradle of non stopping things,
Carrying never sanctuary,
Does it make any sense?

Is there something for me?
Like a temple where it all ends?

Downed by all fear,
Can't keep up the pace,
Something just don't feel right,

Probably the feeling of my own prescence,
So I sit here..

Poetry by Alexander
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Written on 2006-05-31 at 17:16

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Hi Alex.
I like this one, but it is so sad..
Never talk so ugly about yourself.
Well written!

Christoffer Waye
Powerful words, and a great poem you have a talent that i have not seen in many :)
Great work

Ah...I too have these feelings. Great job!

lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Alexander this is a lovley poem and your heart speaks in your words well done rgds mike

Amanda Manmohan
This poem was so sad, but still very beautiful. Don't feel so lost and alone, there are many here who would gladly do anything to make you happy. Nice write :)

Onyeka Nwelue
You know what, Alex? You should not be in this bay...you are really one fantastic poet I have ever seen...

Keep up the wonderful writing.

alex, this poem is filled with emotion and sadness but i am going to say this once again i am always here for you if you need to talk i will listen for i love you with all of my heart!!!! i do care about you very much!!!
lots of love from amber lynn