If one is familiar with George Gordon, Lord Byron's life and oeuvre as a poet then one will be able to appreciate the ironies of this sonnet, which I accordingly title as "Lord Byron's Improbable Lament."


Lord Byron's Improbable Lament

I longed for a love pure like driven snow,
untouched and virgin, in the age to come;
but the age came and left until my woe
o'er vestal love lost filled up my autumn.
Heartbroken, I have not a princess met
or maiden girl with whom to spend a night
of ardent love (woe! 'Twas best to forget
my heart's once foolish hope for such delight.).
Unstained by sin, naïve and innocent
and spoiled by decadence not in the least;
I cast'd aside my youth's salacious bent
and shunned my lusts as if I were some priest.
Now old and bootless, I've ne'er known desire
or pierced the flower of a nymph on fire.




Sonnet by Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2019-05-29 at 22:41

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Sameen
Like Bibek said, the irony is painted well. One piece of advice: the rhythm seems a little wobbly at spots. I would recommend a tightening of the flow to make this good poem into a great one.
2019-05-31


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Well-crafted, Ngoc! I can see the irony in it.
2019-05-30