Sunrise


As the night began
everyone wanted
to see
the beautiful sunrise.

They stayed up all night
and waited doing activities
they stayed up ALL night, to find out
that it was not 6am it was 7am!
they waited another hour
to see it
they thought it was beautiful.

They looked for what seemed like forever
but it was worth it,
they all said together WOW!

The colours were red orange and purple
the sky turned aqua
there was no wind.




Poetry by James.C.Towle
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Written on 2020-01-21 at 21:41

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
What a lovely write! By the end, I was looking forward to the beautiful sunrise, too. Welcome to PoetBay :)
2020-01-24


shells
A sunrise is always worth the wait, the last line fits so well. Welcome to The Bay.
2020-01-23


MetaPoetics The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful work! And welcome to Poetbay. :)
2020-01-23


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
The final line is wonderful, it brings the whole poem to quiet close.
2020-01-22



awesome write
2020-01-22


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
A beautiful write

~L.~
2020-01-21