Thank you KJC it was a wonderful experience writing this poem with you:) thank you thank you thank you !


Behind my tears (monologue)co- writing with KJC


Behind my tears

I feel just at a loss,

silent tears that don't drop~

Silent tears that don't drop...
When can I STOP?!
[whisper]

(((Just me in my silent pain
I 've been always like a rock)))

I have tears why, how?
How can this be, tears for you?

We only just met today
Why do I feel this way?

Is it love or just one of my illusions?
- Always a dreamer...
[whisper]

(((Can it be love at first sight?)))

I just want to feel loved
Even if its JUST for few moments
A kiss is just a kiss...
[whisper]

(((But my lips are going to be kissed)))

Silent tears don't drop
So many years of silent tears
Tears that never dropped.

- I just want to feel loved!
[whisper]

(((Please look at me
make me feel special
Touch my soul)))

*My soul is crying out for you*

- Can you hear me?
could you
would you listen?

- I never said that :
I don't want to be loved!!!
I just want to be loved

for what I really am...

Tears of what I feel for you
well up inside in pain
there I go again!

I have tears here now
tears melt drop and bow
everytime I speak to you...

My eyes are sad
the pain I feel
brings me to this end
can we just be friends.

- I will be there for you
comfort and care for you...
[whisper]

(((When will I learn to be lonely?)))




Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-08 at 14:25

Tags Loneliness  Tears  Love 

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Dan Cederholm
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Yea when will we learn!!!

This is so Good Poem!!!

Do we ever learn???

Kramizzz Dan
2006-06-09


Amanda Manmohan
The last line of this poem is a question that haunts many of us. This poem is extremely heart-breaking, and I love that you expressed such strong and complex emotions so simply. When we meet such special people, we really do have to question our sanity. Well done :)
2006-06-08


Malin Johansson
Very beautiful poem here you two :))
2006-06-08


Zoya Zaidi
A beautiful co-write, you blend so well, can't make out who is who?...
And that is the beauty of the write.
The subject matter is also very touching...
The heart begins to cry with you two there!
***hugs to both of you!***
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-08


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a good write with you friend KJC and the both of you sem to have found a niche of common threads and styles rgds mike
2006-06-08